In his discussion of this story Akhil Sharma says he judges a story by its ability to take the reader a long way from the familiar. Zombie achieves that with intensity.
Told in the first person, Quentin P who refers to himself throughout the story in the third person as QP, explains how he went about killing a host of people. We’re in the mind of a serial killer ultimately.
As QP describes some incidents with his victims and his family, we learn some key things: he is the son of a successful physics professor at university. In his early thirties when he tells this story, he looks after a house they own where students stay. And he uses this space, among others, for his killings. His Dad suspects and discovers what he’s doing, he goes court, but because his family is well connected he doesn’t get sentenced as you might expect.
And we get some grim accounts of some of the horrific murders he’s committed. Made all the worse by the matter of fact style he uses to describe them. His bungled attempts. Disgusting failures. And the way he preys on people nobody will miss, first international students, then local poor people. These cold descriptions make the story, they’re so chilling.
This isn’t a story that attempts easy explanations; QP doesn’t talk much of motivations, though he does seem to be attracted to creating a zombie he can control, which is the cause of death for some of his victims.
He’s from a well-heeled family – it means he probably gets off the full extent of punishment he’d have received were he poor. But is this a feature of the story for some other reason too? Maybe Oates is suggesting his murders are a very sick rebellion against the obvious success of his father, his family. It seems unlikely but that question mark is there.
Most significantly though, QP – as the narrator – seems to be almost oblivious to the horror he is responsible for, and the pain he’s causing. When he describes the awful acts of violence it’s only ever in terms of how they meet his own objectives, his failure to execute his plans effectively. He appears almost unaware of what he is actually doing. Perhaps a comment on what it is to be a murderer of this kind, to act with an absolute void of empathy.
*Akhil Sharma is discussing this on the excellent New Yorker fiction podcast